Well..

The graphics and animation were really quite well pulled off, although it seemed a little too bouncy considering the actual content.

The sound and music really didn't seem to fit in with the genre of the cartoon. The music seemed to have far too many beats and drums and the cartoon would benefit from a more ambient tune. Nevertheless, the animation did seem to synchronise well with music.

The plot of the cartoon wasn't exactly the most intellectually challenging humour and was kind of base, also the actual plot of the cartoon seemed to dwindle further on into the animation and the ending was kind of anticlimatic. However the toon seemed to have a nice kind of cinematic quality with the various camera views.

You probably won't read this but still some of the stuff is worth noting.
I particulary like that you use preloader games in your movies.

Kinda Corny..

But still a great piece with a nice use of graphics.
The sound was a little difficult to hear in places but it is definitely worth watching.

It isn't that bad

It obviously has a lot of potential although it is slightly buggy, I would suggest you check your submission for such bugs before submission.
Other than that I liked it.

Brilliant

I love this game, I will be getting my console copy very soon
+ the last reviewer advertising some crappy game, grrr, kill him

Wow.

Every single thing you produce is excellent.

Excellent.